Tom woke up suddenly and completely wet, he just had a terrible nightmare. Someone without face (he couldn’t see correctly) broke open a door from a private house where were sleeping the three members of a family: the father, the mother and their little daughter.
The burglar only wants to take some money (he knew where exactly was) but something went wrong, the little child listening a very tiny noise woke up and went to find out what was it. She saw someone in the dinner room and inconsciently she made a little shout which provoqued that the burglar turned up on his foot and saw the terrified child...
The alarm clock started to sound in Tom’s bedrom, he didn’t understand nothing, he was awake before, well maybe finally all was the nightmare. He took his daily shower and went to the kitchen to prepare his breakfast, as everyday he turned up the radio to listen the knews during his breakfast.
“ Strange burglary happened yesterday in our calmy city, a burglar who broke open a private house was surprised by the youngest member of the family, a six year old girl ...”
He turned off the radio without listened the end of the new, what was happened? It was a nightmare? He had some strange power? He couldn’t think correctly, better go to work and try to calm, he needed.
At work, some collegue asked to him :
- What happened yesterday night?
- I’m sorry I don’t understand what do you ask me – says Tom
- Don’ you? Go on, remember, I phoned you to ask about our tennis match this weekend and you ordered me to be quiet one second you were listening I don’t know what in TV knews, after that, we could’nt talk more, I think you felt asleep, it wasn’t like I explain?
- Well, perhaps, I don’t remember nothing, but that explain a lot of things, I were exhausted yesterday night, I came to bed early and I put on the TV to see the Knews, when they started to talk about the strange burglary you phoned me but how I was so exhausted I felt asleep and I dreamed with the last knew I listened. Well, I’m so sorry, what about the match?
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The story is nice but your English is terrible. Try to correct and PLEASE, next time consider revising your text more thoroughly before you post it!
-Tom suddenly (WO) woke up. HE WAS completely wet.
-Someone without A face
-where THE THREE MEMBERS OF A FAMILY, the father, the mother and their little daughter, (WO) WERE sleeping
-The burglar only wantED to take some money (he knew exactly (WO) WHERE IT was)
-the little child listening TO a very tiny noise
-She saw someone in the dinING room and UnconsciOUSLy she made a little shout which proVOKED that the burglar turned up on his foot and saw the terrified child...
-he didn’t understand ANYTHING
-well, maybe IT was ALL (WO) A nightmare.
-he turned the radio ON
-He turned the radio OFF (WO) without listenING TO the end of the NEWS...
-what HAD happened?
-WAS IT (WO) a nightmare?
-DID He HAVE some strange POWERS?
-He couldn’t think correctly. IT'D BE better TO go to work and try to calm DOWN, he needed IT.
-At work, some collegue asked (0) him
-What happened LAST night?
-I’m sorry I don’t understand what (0) you ARE askING (0) – saID Tom
-Don’T you? COME ON!, TRY TO remember, I phoned you to ask YOU about our tennis match this weekend and you ASKED me to be quiet one second. You were listening TO... I don’t know what in TV (0)news, after that, we could’nt talk ANY more, I think you felt asleep, ISN'T IT AS I HAVE explainED?
-I don’t remember ANYTHING,
- but that explainS a lot of things, I WAS exhausted LAST night, I WENT to bed early and I TURNED on the TV to WATCH the (0)news, when they started TALKING about the strange burglary you phoned me but AS I was so exhausted I felt asleep and I dreamed with the last PIECE OF NEWS I WAS listenING TO. Well, I’m so sorry, what about the match?
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